Peer feedback:
The feedback i received was to take out some of the speech in which the interviewer says about Alice. I was also advised to edit the script to make it more direct and more forward due to the fact that i will not actually be filming this documentary i could include more questions of a personal nature.
I was also advised that if i was to structure the questions to the Alice's family much better the structure of the script would be much better.
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