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peer feedback - unit 41

Feedback:
What works well:

• I like the opening and the title is clear.
• The music is clear and works well with the footage.
• The sound of the road works well and gives a good idea of location.
• Humorous clips makes the documentary work.
• The documentary makes clear on who the main subject is.
• The introduction is interesting.
• Voice ver works well with the archive footage and teapot footage.
• backstory allows us to know more about his career and his interesting life. 
• montage of background footage works well along with his voice in the background.

What doesn't work:

• Some of the footage isn't filmed so well - filmed on an iPhone instead of a camera - Poor quality.
• Some of the sound is fuzzy and not so clear.
• in some cases there is repetition and this can be spotted easily. This is not needed.

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