Script analysis.

For my Unit 11 - script writing project, | first had to write a draft script for my ideal documentary idea. I then got given peer feedback from teachers to give me a better story line set up and structure. This ranged from the way i should explain and word the descriptive parts to the set up and narrative structure on the questions i should ask the questions and the order in which i should ask them. This allow me to come out with a better script than i originally had with a better narrative structure and storyline.

Application of post production : visual and audio

1.)  with these visual post production images, i have edited something within this clip in order to enhance the visual aspect and to improve the clip. With the first clip i have edited the brightness so that it is easier to see the clip. 

2.) With this clip, i have also improved the brightness and enhanced the contrast. This has improved the clip. 

3.) 

In this clip, i have reduced the speed in which the panning happens so that the motion creates a better feel for the audience and the location in which the clip is taken. 

1.) In this clip, i have made the sound clearer to clarify the quality of the sound to make it clearer and less noisy.

Unit11 - finished script

Storyboard

                                      

 

                                      

peer feedback - unit 41

Feedback:
What works well:

• I like the opening and the title is clear.
• The music is clear and works well with the footage.
• The sound of the road works well and gives a good idea of location.
• Humorous clips makes the documentary work.
• The documentary makes clear on who the main subject is.
• The introduction is interesting.
• Voice ver works well with the archive footage and teapot footage.
• backstory allows us to know more about his career and his interesting life. 
• montage of background footage works well along with his voice in the background.

What doesn't work:

• Some of the footage isn't filmed so well - filmed on an iPhone instead of a camera - Poor quality.
• Some of the sound is fuzzy and not so clear.
• in some cases there is repetition and this can be spotted easily. This is not needed.

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Shooting Script - Unit 11

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